My 1st (Pathetic) Attempt at Song Writing ... After 12 Years

Dig my latest creation. I have not written a song ever since secondary school. What do you think?

I used to think that
Love was blind
Over-rated
Vastly used
Evidence of one's longing desire.
Reach out to me
In all eternity
Clear the sky
Keep the faith
Youthful desire, never fade.

Perhaps it would be better if I tried to compose the tune to go along with it…